Thursday, March 8, 2012

personification

Dinnertime Chorus

The teapot sang as the water boiled
The ice cubes cackled in their glass
the teacups chattered to one another.
While the chairs were passing gas
The gravy gurgled merrily
As the oil danced in a pan.
Oh my dinnertime chorus
What a lovely, lovely clan!


The Gastronomic Gym

Pasta twirling and spinning,
peas do vertical jumps
mashed potatoes swimming.
meat doing bench press and pumps.
Food has begun to exercise
but it’s not in any gym.
My brother said its happening
right inside of him.

Lyrics to The Personification Of My Heart :
ripped in two my heart cries out loud,
"why are you doing this to me?" "oh god, I'm sorry," is my only reply.
I scribble down your name on this blank page that is no longer waiting for my ink
I slip into sleep and awake finding your name crossed out,
like it was never meant to be there in the first place
in my hand lies the pen, the weapon of choice
my pen is mightier than your heartbreaking voice
now I'll write I love you down the same number of times you said it to me
then I'll shove the hundreds of pages down your throat
so you can use them for the next fool
that comes around and thinks you're the world.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

simile

Comparing sports to an object
1.Soccer is like a bet
2.Baseball is like a bat
3.Volleyball is like a net

Comparing a holiday to an object
1.Christmas is like a card
2.Holloween is like a candy
3Thanksgiven is like a cemony

Comparing a person to an object
1.My sister is like a rock
2.My mom is like a rose
3.My brother is like a rocket

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

metaphor

School is joyful
Filling my life with success
School is a flame
Making me thirsty for knowledge
School is rainbow
making my eyes see colors

Thursday, February 2, 2012

metaphor

Comparing the universe to an object 1. The moon is a bright light.
2.The stars is a lamp.
3.The clouds are plates.

Emotions to an object
1.Excitment is a earthquake
2.Anger is a gun.
3.Sadness is a mop.

Person to an object
1.My mom is a book.
2.Mr Juan is a history book.
3.My brother is a wall.

Wednesday, January 18, 2012

hyperbole poem

im the baddest of all
with the baddest of all
with the baddest car
sickest of all
wont stop
wont quit
wont stop
wont quit
you see coming
you see me going
never stop
head up
not down
putting it up
putting it down

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

hyperbole poem

My brother was walking with his friend and they found a talking dog . It was the size of a rat. My brother grab it and took it home. The dog became a tornado and made a mess at the house. The dog was so hungry that he ate my brother and his friend!!!

Thursday, January 12, 2012

alluding

1).what is the poet alluding  to in these lines ?
A pregnat girl that got ripe while slavery.
2)Explain the referense to the MASON-DIXION?
The line was the alluding between North and South.
3)What Is the poet reffering to in  the line ,"when the rainbow's enuf"?
She refering the book that "the color girls ,when the rainbow's not enuff"comitted suiced.
    By:Talib Kweli

Monday, December 12, 2011

I Aint Woman

1.Who is the "man " to which the author refers is the "priest" .
2.What is the author alluding to "or over mud puddles"? alluding to let you know saying something but you dont mean it it.
3.What does author means "i have plowed and planted" Planted means to to creat like a grow a seed and plowed to dig a hole first to grow the seed.
4.Explain the line "and no man could head me. "
No man is better than me and she done it all she could do what a man could do .
5.the little man in black is the priest

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

alliteration

1. Terrific Tony has a truck that has a big trunk.
2. English earmuffs are use early in the events.
3. Black bears and brown bugs give big bites and bruses.
4.. Pizza and pasta are partners and parents put together.
5. Principles and pitbulls are put in pet shops .6.Best fiends and girl friends and boy friends are alwaly best friends.

Monday, November 14, 2011

two songs that use alliteration

Artist;Tupac-keep your head up
Got our name from a woman and our game from a woman
I wonder why we take from our women
Why we rape our women, do we hate our women?
I think it's time to kill for our women
Time to heal our women, be real to our women
And if we don't we'll have a race of babies
That will hate the ladies, that make the babies
And since a man can't make one
He has no right to tell a woman when and where to create one
So will the real men get up
I know you're fed up ladies, but keep your head up

artist;Biggie Smalls name of song; juicy
I made the change from a common thief
To up close and personal with Robin Leach
And I'm far from cheap, I smoke skunk with my peeps all day
Spread love, it's the Brooklyn way
The Moet and Alize keep me pissy
Girls used to diss me
Now they write letters 'cause they miss me
I never thought it could happen, this rappin' stuff
I was too used to packin' gats and stuff
Now honies play me close like butter played toast
From the Mississippi down to the east coast
Condos in Queens, indo for weeks
Sold out seats to hear Biggie Smalls speak
Livin' life without fear
Puttin' 5 karats in my baby girl's ears
Lunches, brunches, interviews by the pool
Considered a fool 'cause I dropped out of high school
Stereotypes of a black male misunderstood
And it's still all good

Uh... and if you don't know, now you know, you know

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

What is poetry

1.Poetry is something nice it could be about love  it doesnt realy matters and when u express your self in the emotions of something that u are talking about.
2.Their is some people that will agree with what you said and their is people that will agree it all depends in the way u speak infront of them.
3.People ask if poetry has to rhyme it doesnt has to rhyme it could be simple or it could rhyme either way it is still poetry.
4.It doesnt matters alongest it make sence to your self is all good to go . All the words you put in a poem it atleast has to matches to what you are saying.
5.The emotions that poetry cause are love , happyness ,and sadness it all depends what the poem is about .

Thursday, August 25, 2011

Vincent Van Gogh

1. Who was Vincent Van Gogh?date of birth ; Vincent Van Gogh between 1860 and 1880 decided to become a artist
he was know in his art as the chief symbol of expression.
2. Why was he so famous?
Vincent Van Gogh became more famous in 1886 he went to Paris to join in his brother Theo the manager of Goupil's gallery.another reason he became more famous with one of his famous paint named called (The potato Eater in 1885).
3. What was happening in the United States during the time period? In my community on september 9th California became the 31 st state admited to the unit in the year 1850.
4. What was happening in your community during that time period? Did your community exist?Balboa Park began as 1400 acres of land set aside in 1868 by San Diego civic leaders.

Monday, August 1, 2011

hemophilia

Hemophilia

Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Luis' Definitions

Untitled

Self Exploration

Wordle: Luis Description